Vast improvement compared to last year's. There is actually good audio! This one of those animation that amuses my mind if I let it marinate over time. Now I need to pick up the slack finishing my own animation. Good job dude.
I'll be waiting. Haha.
Thank you kindly.
That was amusing. Great animation. My only gripe is that the sound does need some work. Maybe reducing treble and adding little more bass adds the illusion that they are in an indoor airplane. Otherwise great job.
It took me awhile to get the joke. At first I thought the title "Yoshi's Woolly World" was a fake but its actually real. Than I realize your name is similar to the game's title. I feel dumb now. :(
I find it strange this isnt in the daily top 4 or featured on the front page.
Thanks for your confidence ;---; I'm not really sure how to promote on this site yet, that might have something to do with it....
Kinda neat. I think you should of used a better thumbnail because its hard to tell what it is. Maybe putting Ryu as a thumbnail is a clearer presentation. I got a nostalgia attack at your freakazoid at the end. Really missed the good ol' days.
This freaken took only 6 days to create and 6 hours to create the song?! Didnt think this kind of quality is even possible with that short of time. I am impressed good sir. Really liked the shillouette style art direction and the music fits the mood.
haha well to be fair it's not like it was a relaxing 6 days, if I had had the full 3 weeks available to work on it I might have made something of nearly the same quality for this round. I was just forced to compress all the work at the end, a bit stressful if I say so myself.
Looks more like a teaser than a trailer. Little more detail would be nice. I am surprise how you got well known voice artists on this. Good luck on your project and I hope it gets completed.
Wow this one really poked my mind. Good job with this. What really grabbed me is the sound design and voices. This made me put the voice artist on my watch list when I consider a voice artist for my future projects. She really can perform a convincing dramatic role.
Thanks! Sound design is something I love tinkering with, but I often feel a lot of indie animators tend to ignore or push it to the side. Sound really is like 70% of animation
and yeah, Codeblack did great! (especially for having to deliver the lines like two hours after sending them)
Overall a very enjoyment short animation.
I like how you mange to control those difficult camera moves while trying to keep into perspective. I also like how there is fluidity and those inconsistent artwork can give off as illusion of blurs
What puts me off is I feel artwork itself inconsistent . What I usually do is create a character sheet in a lot of different angles to check for consistency. You can still use the inconsistency as a disguise for an illusion of speed though.
Also some of the action seems to suddenly pause during a fast pace arc. It didnt flow right for me. Maybe you can fix this with some scene editing.
I am just critiquing as a fellow animator that wants tmprove. it made me want Capcom to stop cancelling megaman games already.
Thanks for the critique man. No need to feel like your being an ass or anything. I always appreciate the critique it really helps. Honestly.
The comedy wasnt my cup of tea but it was a admirable job. I thought the music was distracting that it took away comedic scene with those facial expression. Some of the direction felt it didnt mash up together that it felt arkward to me.
Some might gripe about the uses of 3D aide but I thought some anime shows used it quite well like "Arpeggio of Blue Steel" or those 3D scene in "Black Rock Shooter.
I guess since this is going for an anime style feel. The expectation from the audience is much higher. Its really hard to achieve this style. I am trying to achieve this style myself and I am not even close.
Nonetheless; good luck on your next project
Its tough to make deravitive works in a genre that has done it all and done it all very well. I guess the trick is to just keep on until you finally get it
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