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I am surprise how you can consistency animate. I have a hard time finding inspiration to animate. Good job sir. I was entertained.

Sexual-Lobster responds:

cheers

Now you got two daily first. Isnt it stange how your getting them when you least expected? Anyway congrats again. :)

WooleyWorld responds:

I know.
... 0_o That's what scares me.

Ah my first competition. Glad you finally won the daily feature dude. The award was long overdue. The ending was badass.

WooleyWorld responds:

Thanks man.
My next short was how I never win daily 1st but now...
I guess I'll make it nayway. XP

Pretty good. A lot of people are complaining about the voice but I think its fine because I feel the characters are suppose to be dull. The voice sound effect does seem to stick out too much. Since the characters are indoors, maybe you can add a little more bass to the voices so the character can feel like there indoors.

I feel there are some jump cuts too. When the male character comes home from work, the scene instantly cut to the male character sitting down. This is just my take but maybe you can put a black screen in-between the scenes and put a sound effect of a chair sound. This may provide direction to the audience of what the characters are doing.

I am not saying your film is bad. Its actually charming. I am just critiquing because as a fellow animator, I am also constantly searching to become a better animator. I am also attempting an anime series.

Good luck to you in your series.

How in the bloody hell your animations rated so low. Its well animated and by seeing the comments, you can animate very quickly. A lot of people would kill with these animations skills and you can also animate at different camera angles. good job.

AaLBERT responds:

Oh, Thank you so much! :)

Wow you did all of the animation in 3 weeks. You Ma'am are a goddess. I like your artistic choice in this. The light colors and color-like texture give an innocent feel.

Hack-Back found this guy as an art thief. The original creator's websites are:
http://rgxsupersonic.newgrounds.com/
http://rgxsupersonic.deviantart.com/

This needs to be alerted and stealing someone's hard work is terrible.

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